Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Stop! Put down that pen, close that textbook and listen to me! The time has come when we must join forces and put an end to this ongoing war we call school. For years we have battled against our enemy, the Teachers, and in that time they have slowly gained domination over us and we have let them! BUT now we are going to stop their fast moving train in its tracks.

They have constantly been inventing new weaponry to blast us with- essays, assignments, tests and homework, which, with every hit have made us more and more determined to seek revenge. Too much of our lives' is being wasted trying to get rid of these weapons which are destroying our precious youth. Our childhood is ticking away and all of our spare time is now spent focusing on what these so called 'Teachers' throw at us from every direction.

There is only one way we will overcome this outrageous war and that is to fight together and show our enemy what we're made of . No longer will we be pushovers, we will claim back our dignity, pride and our lives. It is time we stand up for our rights and finish this war, not only for ourselves but for everyone who has fought this battle before and failed. As a team we can and will win this and at last we will be FREE!

1 comment:

  1. Good work Chloe, I like your use of metaphors, it really sets the atmosphere for the piece of writing. Very engaging!

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